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Pearl-o ([personal profile] schmerica) wrote2008-06-02 06:41 pm

commentfic: selkie au

So I told [livejournal.com profile] loveyouallwrong about how I wanted Pete/Mikey selkie fic, and she freaked out and called me a furry. If you ever wondered where Lea's line are: there you go. Pete/Hemmy mpreg where Hemmy has magically turned into a human? Okay. Selkie fic? SQUICK.

The more you know, right?

Uh, for those of you who don't share Lea's aversion, here's 750 words of commentfic on the subject, because I am dumb and wrote it out to describe to someone and thus lost all need to actually make myself write it. Lame, self. Very lame.

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Pete lives on this little island off the coast somewhere and even though he has awesome friends and stuff, he still gets in ~~~moods, you know? And when he gets in his moods he goes off to the beach and sits and watches the waves.

And one time when he's there in the middle of the night, because he can't sleep, he's sitting there staring out to the sea and out of the corner of his eye there are these seals, just playing. And he can't stop looking at one of them.

And when he comes back the next day, he sees the seal again, but this time it comes out of the water, and from where he's sitting he can see it go behind a rock and just -- slip off its skin. And suddenly there's this beautiful boy there.

And he says "hey" much too loudly, and he's afraid he's going to scare him off, but the boy just looks at him calmly and says "hello."

And Pete says "I'm Pete." and the boy says, "I'm Mikey."

And they hang out all the rest of that day, and then again a few days later, and again, and it becomes an every day thing, the highlight of Pete's days and they fall in ~~~~love.

And they start having sex, too, and they cuddle afterwards but at some point Mikey always has to get up and leave and pick up his sealskin again and return to the sea. That's just the way things are.

And one night Pete is holding onto him so tightly and he says "I wish. I wish you could stay."

And he can feel Mikey tense up in his arms but he doesn't let go and after a minute Mikey says in a really soft voice, "Sometimes people get stuck. If something happened to my skin, I couldn't go back."

And even Pete can tell that Mikey's giving him permission. He thinks about burning it, first, but he can't do that to Mikey, not ever, so instead he just hides it.

Mikey never looks for it.

And they're really honestly happy together! Or, well, at least as happy as any of the regular couples on the island, you know? They're still kind of fucked-up, because Pete still has his moods and Mikey is really ~~~pining for the sea, but they really do love each other.

And that goes on for years. At some point they have a babby! Which, whatever, mpreg is weird yes, but this is an island where all sorts of weird things happen. They have a bb girl and Pete is ecstatic and Mikey smiles his Mikey-smile and it's all good. But sometimes Pete listens to Mikey's bedtime stories and lullabyes for the bb and they're all about the sea and swimming and how much her uncle gerard would love her.

And one day when the baby is old enough to walk and go through things and stuff, she opens a drawer that Mikey has always avoided, and ... There's his skin.

And he sets down the pan he was holding to make supper and picks up the baby and kisses her forehead and then he takes his skin and he's gone.

And Pete gets home and there's nothing.

He gets back in the habit of going to the sea at night and staring out onto the waves again. Sometimes he thinks he sees Mikey, but it never really is him, and they never come too close.

Except then one day they do. And one seal comes out onto the sand and Pete doesn't want to believe it's Mikey, it's just a seal, right, but he can't help it, and the seal comes right up to him and rubs against and makes a soft noise. He drops a pretty polished stone at Pete's feet and stands there gazing at him for a long time.

And then he goes back and joins the other two seals in the water again (Pete thinks one of them must be his brother he missed so much) and starts to swim away. But he stops and looks back one more time, and Pete waves him goodbye.

And Pete takes the stone and goes back to his house and his little half-selkie baby and he's still heartbroken, but it's like now he has a goodbye. He can start to move on. He wears the stone on a chain around his neck but someday he finds another person to love forever.

[identity profile] restless-jedi.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 01:45 am (UTC)(link)
I'd like it better if it ended with Pete pining forever. Or Pete finds/weds someone else but is still secretly pining forever.

Yes, yes I do have a thing for pining.

[identity profile] soundslikej.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 01:46 am (UTC)(link)
O.O

Pearl, you just made me teary with selkie fic.

[identity profile] strobelighted.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 01:46 am (UTC)(link)
♥♥♥♥♥

do they ever see each other again though?

[identity profile] miss-saigon.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 01:48 am (UTC)(link)
oh man one of my favorite books when I was a kid was about a selkie but it was a scary selkie who wanted to take a human girl down to the bottom of the ocean to be his bride. I like mikey the selkie much better:)
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[identity profile] go-gentle.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 01:50 am (UTC)(link)
;♥;

[identity profile] restless-jedi.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 01:50 am (UTC)(link)
Does Pete's selkie baby leave him for the sea one day? Does it pine for the sea and its selkie daddy?

[identity profile] erilyn.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 01:54 am (UTC)(link)
That was the thing I was most worried about. But it's so gorgeously melancholy and sweet :)

[identity profile] restless-jedi.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 01:54 am (UTC)(link)
Selkie fic always is. I think it's a law.

[identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 01:56 am (UTC)(link)
nnnnnnn! the baby is only half-selkie. so it just likes to swim a lot but doesn't turn into a seal.

[identity profile] restless-jedi.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 01:58 am (UTC)(link)
I figured. But it could become a sailor or something? IDK.

[identity profile] bouncy.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 02:03 am (UTC)(link)
How did you make this awesome? XD Awesome. hfcgvhjmg

[identity profile] erilyn.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 02:03 am (UTC)(link)
Does sometime Pete see their daughter on the beach at night, head bowed close to a seal's head? But he doesn't approach, just leaves them to it?

[identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 02:05 am (UTC)(link)
quite possibly!

pearl: MAYBE SOMETIMES SEALS COME CLOSE WHEN PETE IS TAKING THE BABBY SWIMMING
pearl: AND THE BABY LAUGHS AND SMILES AT THEM

[identity profile] restless-jedi.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 02:06 am (UTC)(link)
That is sweet. I am a little in love with this image.

[identity profile] 7iris.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 02:07 am (UTC)(link)
;_; I thought up until the last paragraph that Mikey took their daughter with him, and now I can't decide which version is more depressing. I'm kind of glad this isn't longer, because I think the long version would break my heart completely.

[identity profile] shoemaster.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 02:07 am (UTC)(link)
It isn't always the same seal, either. Sometimes there's more than one, all of them checking up on her.

Maybe one time she's out sailing and there's a ~storm! and the boat capsizes and a whole band of them come together to save her!

[identity profile] lovesongwriter.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 02:16 am (UTC)(link)
I CRIED AT THIS OK? ;_____; FOREVER.

[identity profile] makesomelove.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 02:17 am (UTC)(link)
OMG :( Can't Uncle Gerard come and visit?

[identity profile] x--kes--x.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 02:23 am (UTC)(link)
;_;

I love this a lot.

[identity profile] angelsaves.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 02:25 am (UTC)(link)
i actually teared up ;___; did you read seal child when you were a kid? i loved that book so much.

[identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 02:34 am (UTC)(link)
AWWWWWWWWWWWW

HER SEAL FAMILY LOVES HER SO MUCH!
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[identity profile] reflectedeve.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 02:36 am (UTC)(link)
Ohh, this made me happy. Selkie stories were always some of my favorites . . . so haunting. ;_;

Why do I always love the tragic pairings so much? Pete/Mikey is made for AUs like this.

[identity profile] magdalyna.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 03:13 am (UTC)(link)
I love you.

♥

[identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 03:35 am (UTC)(link)
Pining is always nice!

[identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 03:35 am (UTC)(link)

[identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 03:35 am (UTC)(link)
From afar, mostly. and sometimes the seals come close to the kid when she's playing on the beach and they seem to have a connection.

[identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 03:36 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh, that sounds really creepy!

[identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 03:36 am (UTC)(link)
Mikey! Peeeeeeeeeete.

[identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 03:36 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much!

[identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 03:37 am (UTC)(link)
Awwwww. No, the baby is half human, so she can't come with. Mikey has to leave her behind.

I don't know why this makes me happy when it's so tragic, but it really makes me sigh with love.

[identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 03:38 am (UTC)(link)
*CUDDLES*

GERARD SEAL AND FRANK SEAL BOTH MISSED MIKEY A LOT WHEN HE WAS GONE, THOUGH. THEY WERE REALLY HAPPY WHEN HE CAME BACK.

[identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 03:38 am (UTC)(link)
No. :(

[identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 03:38 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 03:38 am (UTC)(link)
I don't think I ever read that, no! *notes*

[identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 03:39 am (UTC)(link)
Because Pete and Mikey. ;_____;

[identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 03:39 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] angelsaves.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 03:42 am (UTC)(link)
looking back, that book totally contains my first lesbian otp. and i was nine. /o\

[identity profile] erilyn.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 04:04 am (UTC)(link)
This made me flail a little!

[identity profile] erilyn.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 04:06 am (UTC)(link)
Awww, little baby splashing the water with her hands (while Pete holds her), gurgling and giggling away.

(If you're not writing more of this, there's always the arranged marriage fic that you claimed you couldn't write cause of this...)

I AM MOAST SHAMELESS /o\
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[identity profile] go-gentle.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 04:44 am (UTC)(link)
I don't know if there's any way for selkie fic to have a happy ending. ;_____;

[identity profile] jocondite.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 07:01 am (UTC)(link)
At some point they have a babby! Which, whatever, mpreg is weird yes, but this is an island where all sorts of weird things happen. They have a bb girl and Pete is ecstatic and Mikey smiles his Mikey-smile and it's all good. But sometimes Pete listens to Mikey's bedtime stories and lullabyes for the bb and they're all about the sea and swimming and how much her uncle gerard would love her.

This is my favourite paragraph in the history of the world. It's so 'mpreg, baby! SUDDEN CUTENESS.' ♥♥♥

Also, Lea is wrong. How can she cheer and applaud when I write Pete/tentacle monster, and not like adorable selkie fic? :(
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[identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 06:46 pm (UTC)(link)
I have given up completely on trying to comprehend the complexity of Lea's soul.

[identity profile] absenteye.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 10:29 pm (UTC)(link)
LINES, WHAT LINES? I DON'T EVEN KNOW ANYMORE. *facepalm*

Surprise selkie peen! WHAAAAAAAAAAAAT. (http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a334/absenteye/Manips/SelkieMikey.jpg)

[identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 10:49 pm (UTC)(link)
...I am struck speechless.

[identity profile] absenteye.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 11:06 pm (UTC)(link)
I know rite? IT IS SO UGLY, YET...MIKEY. \o?

SOMETIMES I SCARE MYSELF.

[identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 11:17 pm (UTC)(link)
He keeps looking at me.

[identity profile] absenteye.livejournal.com 2008-06-03 11:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Also he's sitting on a dead seal. :(

[identity profile] cass404.livejournal.com 2008-06-04 08:40 am (UTC)(link)
Awww, I wish I had a pretty seal icon just so I could make it bark for selkie!Mikey and his magical selkie assbaby with Pete. Which is *horrible* feedback now that I read it but it was a really sweet story. I only feel bad for the bb, because she might miss the ocean without really knowing why. Damn, I really desperately need sleep.

[identity profile] xsnarkasaurus.livejournal.com 2008-06-21 02:55 pm (UTC)(link)
...okay, you just broke my heart. ow. D:

(i'm going through old tabs this morning, can you tell?)