HICKEY COMMENT FIC POST

[schmerica]

So okay, I have been having a pretty rotten week, and I know I am not anything like alone in this.

But you know what makes everything better? HICKEYS. No, seriously, there's something about them in fic -- that combination of the sexiness of making out that we sometimes neglect for the porn; the heat of the moment thing where they maybe go farther than they mean to; that possessive satisfaction of seeing a mark they made on the other person.

So lordessrenegade and I just spent the last twenty minutes emailing our own hickey ficlets back and forth, and we have decided that the secret to making this week less sucky is to come have EVERYBODY come write comment fic about them here. Who's with us?

We'll start, naturally:

MIKEY/PETE (pearl)

I just really like the idea of Mikeyway and hickeys, for some reason.

Sometimes, during the Summer of Like, there are times when Pete and Mikey are together and there are marks on Mikey that Pete knows he wasn't the one to put there. And it's not like he can say about it, because ... they're not together, him and Mikey. They're not boyfriends, they've never made each other any promises about anything. He doesn't owe Pete any explanation.

But Pete always ends up making more marks himself, bigger and better ones, like he's trying to replace them with something of his own. When Mikey;s band sees his chest they laugh and hoot at him for all the hickeys, and Pete loves that sound.

MIKEY/RAY (Jai)

Mikey's not really one for leaving them, he likes getting them too much, but there's this one time he and Ray are making out, and he's kissing Ray's neck, and Ray tips his head like he's trying to get MORE, like he can't get enough of Mikey's mouth on him, so Mikey sucks harder, and he bites, and he can feel the sounds Ray's making under his mouth, which is kind of the hottest thing ever. when he pulls back, there's this mark peeking out from the edge of Ray's shirt, and Mikey feels halfway between pleased and embarrassed every time he catches sight of it while they're onstage.

*****

Put your pairing in the subject line so people can find stuff easier. Obviously Jai and I are bandom-focused at the moment, but any fandom, any pairing, any rating is welcome. Go crazy!

Comments

Re: pete/mikey

[brooklinegirl.livejournal.com]

"Fuck it," Pete said, low in his ear, and licked his way down to a point low on Mikey's neck, right by the collar of his too-tight t-shirt. Pete stayed there, considering the spot with his mouth for a moment, and a light shudder went through Mikey's body. Smiling against the damp skin under his lips, Pete sucked harder, now that he'd found his spot. He put some teeth into it, too – not too much, not too hard, but not gentle either, just enough, he was good at this, he knew he was. Mikey went very very still under him, his body tense under Pete's mouth, under Pete's thigh where it lay across Mikey's. He didn't make a sound, but he didn't pull away, and Pete pushed in closer, sucking hard, then harder.

There was a soft thump as Mikey's Sidekick fell to the floor at their feet.

Score. Pete released Mikey's neck with a noisy, wet sound. "Thank you."

Mikey took a quick breath. "You owe me one."

Pete gave him a wicked grin. "I'm good for it." He looked down at Mikey's neck. "Oh wow."

Mikey moved his jaw a little. "Yeah. I can feel it."

The mark was kind of – huge, and darkening already, and still wet from Pete's mouth. It stood out starkly against the grey of Mikey's Anthrax t-shirt, not even halfway hidden by the collar. Pete was turned on and triumphant, in equal measure. "I really owe you one."

Mikey did that thing where he had no facial expression, but something flickered in his eyes that spoke volumes. "Yeah," he said, and Pete realized he was still sprawled half across Mikey's lap, pressed all up against him, and – oh – half-hard. He swallowed, and pulled away, and Mikey made a move like he was going to follow him down, press him against the couch, go after Pete the same way Pete had gone after Mikey (for a bet, for a bet) - but he sat back instead, fixing his hair and adjusting his glasses and looking at Pete. "You're almost out of time," he mentioned.

"Oh fuck." Pete jumped off the couch, grabbing at Mikey's hand and yanking him up after him. "Gabe will hold me to the fifteen," he explained as he pulled Mikey after him off the bus. "It'll take two minutes."

"Three," Mikey said grimly. "Five, if you count the laughing."

"Five, then," Pete said, as they stumbled down the stairs, and out the door. "And then I'll make it up to you."

"I know," Mikey said, stumbling obediently after him.

Pete swung around when they were both hit concrete, and pushed Mikey up against the side of the bus, leaning in to lick first at the vivid hickey on Mikey's neck, and then to lick at Mikey's lips, quickly. Grinning and breathing hard and weirdly, wildly happy, Pete said, "You bet," grabbing Mikey's hand, as they raced together down the line of busses.

Re: pete/mikey

[pearl-o.livejournal.com]

OH MAN I LOVE THIS. There's a bet, of course there is. And Mikey's like, fine, okay, and he's just sitting there taking it, and Pete can't have that. He makes Mikey drop his Sidekick.

And Mikey's no expression, but the flicker in his eyes, and he might go after Pete, but it's just fixing his head instead. But Pete owes him one. TRACEY I JUST REALLY LOVE THIS OKAY, they're so adorable arrrrgh.

Re: pete/mikey

[brooklinegirl.livejournal.com]

*beams* Oh, pearl, this comment just made me SO HAPPY. &you; Thank you for the comment, and for the hickey-inspiration, and just - yay!

Re: pete/mikey

[soundslikej.livejournal.com]

:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Tracey, I love their FACES.

Re: pete/mikey

[brooklinegirl.livejournal.com]

jaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai, I want to squish them together ALL THE TIME.

Re: pete/mikey

[desfinado.livejournal.com]

Oh god I loved this, you captured so much of their dynamic in such a short little piece!

There was a soft thump as Mikey's Sidekick fell to the floor at their feet.

Mikey's resolve breaking was the hottest thing in here, hands down, especially the way you built up to it. Guhhhhhh.

Re: pete/mikey

[brooklinegirl.livejournal.com]

*beams* THANK you! SO much! I love them, and I loved WRITING them, and now I just just just want to write MORE of them. Like. ALL THE TIME. <3

Re: pete/mikey

[desfinado.livejournal.com]

I will wholeheartedly support that! :D

Re: pete/mikey

[iamsupernova.livejournal.com]

I love all of this, but I especially love considering the spot with his mouth for a moment :D