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Wilby is apparently just stuck in my head the last few days; here's another 900 words of fic from this evening. Emily, Duck, Dan, Sandra.

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Her mom packed up a special basket as a thank you for Duck helping them out with the paint and the renovations in the dining room last weekend; there were some muffins and donuts and cookies and some sandwiches and special tea. She'd wrapped the whole thing with colored plastic wrap and tied a ribbon on it, and Emily had to admit it looked really pretty. Her mom was good at this kind of thing.

She sent Emily down to give it to him in person after lunch, when the place had calmed down and it was just the regulars sitting by the windows nursing their coffees.

"Back in twenty minutes or I'm taking it out of your check!" she called after, when Emily went out the door, and Emily shouted, "Ha!" back at her and shook her head.

There was a truck in the driveway at Duck's house, which meant Emily didn't have to just leave on the front porch and run away. The front door was actually open, even, when she walked up the porch stairs, so she stuck her head in to see if Duck was right there. She didn't see anything at first -- it was dark in the house, compared to the sunlight outside -- but then after a few seconds her eyes adjusted, and she saw that there were people standing over in the corner by the doorway, and that-- They were kissing.

She took a step backwards, immediately embarrassed, but the wooden board underneath her feet let out a loud creak. The earth didn't open beneath her to swallow her up, but the two people did move apart from each other, one of them springing away with almost a jerk. When they turned, she saw that one of them was Duck, but the other person was a man, and she felt even more embarrassed. She recognized him as Mr. Jarvis after a second.

Duck wiped his mouth with the back of his hand. "Hey, Emily," he said. Duck was a hard guy to read; Emily just hoped that was his friendly face and not his pissed face.

"Uh, hi," Emily said, shifting her weight from one foot to another. "I was just about to knock-- I didn't mean to interrupt anything--"

She trailed off a little, but Duck didn't jump in to rescue for anything. He just kept looking at her and raised his eyebrow.

"Um. I brought you a basket," she said. She stuck it out straight in front of her like an offering.

Duck half-smiled and walked forward a little to meet her.

"It's from my mom. And me, too, I guess. It's to thank you for helping us out last week."

"That's sweet," Duck said. He took the thing from her hands and smiled down at her. "Tell her thanks, and she doesn't have to do anything like this."

"I'll tell her," Emily said, "but I don't think it'll make a difference."

"Probably not," Duck said agreeably. He turned around again, stepping further back into the house. "You want some iced tea or lemonade or anything?" he called back to her.

Emily stuck her hands deep into the pockets on her jeans. "Uh, no, I don't think so. I have to be getting back."

"All right," said Duck. "See you later, Emily."

"Bye." Mr. Jarvis was still standing in the corner; he hadn't moved or said anything the whole time, though Duck was turning to him now, still holding the basket. "Bye, Mr. Jarvis," Emily added.

Mr. Jarvis nodded and didn't say anything, not quite looking her in the eye, and Emily turned and fled. She could hear Duck chuckling behind her, but she didn't look back.

She was a little bit out of breath when she got back to the restaurant, so she slipped past her mom into the kitchen.

Mom came into it a minute later. "Hey, honey doll," she said, and gave Emily a quick hug. "You drop it off?"

"He was home, so I just gave it to him," said Emily. "He said to thank you."

Mom smiled, looking pleased at that. Emily leaned back against the counter, her palms flat against the surface. "Did you, uh--" Emily started and then stopped.

"What was that?" said her mom, not really paying attention.

Emily bit her lip and then said, "Did you know that, uh, Duck and Mr. Jarvis were ... you know?"

Mom looked over at her -- she looked amused, her eyes sparkling just a bit like she was going to laugh at Emily. "I haven't seen Duck this happy in a long, long time, if that's what you're asking."

Emily was pretty sure she was blushing. "Never mind," she said. She pushed past her mom, back out to the front counter and the coffee.

Her mom was making fun of her, damn her; Emily could tell. It wasn't like Emily hadn't come across her making out with people before, too, sometimes right in the middle of the living room -- and that was worse than this, worse by far. But she'd never come across two men kissing before, either, and people she didn't know that well, and that was all awkward and embarrassing in its own way...

Maybe, Emily thought glumly, rearranging the sugar packets, maybe when you were sixteen everything had to be awkward and embarrassing. Maybe it was a law. It would certainly explain a lot.

I'll tell you a secret

29/1/06 07:55 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kormantic.livejournal.com
I love Emily so hard, and when she tucks her mom's hair behind her ear at the end of the movie? I cry every time. I am such a sucker! And this was so delightful; I love how she can't read Duck, isn't sure if he's mad at her.

Yay!

Re: I'll tell you a secret

29/1/06 08:14 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
I sort of adore every single character in this movie. It is almost ridiculous!

I think Duck can definitely be quite hard to read. He's quiet, and he just stands there and waits for you to fill in your own silences with whatever you're going to say.

Re: I'll tell you a secret

29/1/06 17:31 (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] isiscolo.livejournal.com
I love Emily so hard, and when she tucks her mom's hair behind her ear at the end of the movie? I cry every time.

Me. Too.

Re: I'll tell you a secret

29/1/06 20:07 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kormantic.livejournal.com
they really sell that moment. Not that I'm misting up a bit just thinking about it or anything. ::koff::

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29/1/06 08:46 (UTC)
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Posted by [personal profile] china_shop
Maybe, Emily thought glumly, rearranging the sugar packets, maybe when you were sixteen everything had to be awkward and embarrassing. Maybe it was a law. It would certainly explain a lot.

This, in particular, is genius. *hearts*

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29/1/06 22:28 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
*grins* Dude, sometimes being a teenager felt like everyone in the world knew the punchline except you, and the adults wouldn't even admit there was a joke.

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29/1/06 10:19 (UTC)
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Posted by [personal profile] sage
*giggles* Sandra's so fabulous. I love that she and Duck are both so unfazeable. :D

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29/1/06 22:29 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
Hee, thanks!

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29/1/06 11:11 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] moojja.livejournal.com
More Wilby fic!! I'm so happy. I like Emily's awkardness, and Duck is the sweetest thing ever.

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29/1/06 22:29 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
Thank you!

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29/1/06 11:56 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] c-regalis.livejournal.com
Eeee! omg, I love Emily so much. And Sandra! And Duck! And Dan! So much love here. *sigh*

Thank you!

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29/1/06 22:29 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
They are all kind of ridiculously lovable. *heart this movie*

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29/1/06 12:36 (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] akite.livejournal.com
maybe when you were sixteen everything had to be awkward and embarrassing. Maybe it was a law. It would certainly explain a lot.

Truer words have never been written. Though, I'm long past 16, I think I'd be pretty embarassed too if I interrupted Duck and Dan kissing. Great story.

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29/1/06 22:29 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
Thanks!

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29/1/06 13:33 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] grey853.livejournal.com
Lovely story. I don't usually like teen angst, but I was floored by how well WW did it in the movie, making it real and heart-breaking, nearly as much as the Duck/Dan storyline. Thanks for sharing.

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29/1/06 22:30 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
Heh, now see, I love teen angst! My poor sullen teenage girl. *hugs her*

I am glad you enjoyed this!

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29/1/06 15:16 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] mrsronweasley.livejournal.com
This, and the ficlet you'd posted earlier, was lovely. Your Dan is pretty much perfect, even the little bit we see here. He's quiet, and awkward, and has that air of confusion around him. It's really just perfect. WW fic makes me so damn happy. *sigh* Duck. Oh, Duck. His scene with Emily is close to being my favorite, I just love seeing those two interact. Thank you for this.

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29/1/06 22:30 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
Awww, yay! Thank you very much!

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29/1/06 16:31 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] brooklinegirl.livejournal.com
oh, *LOVES*. Seriously, dude, it's very hard to get Emily's voice just right, that mixture of experience vs. youth, and I think you hit it just perfectly here. I love, love, love this. I think it's enormously hard, as well, to write anything on Wilby Island; it's such a tiny place and I think a lot of stories make things that happen be *Events*, you know, whereas this was just - simple, a kiss, and a gift basket, and it works. I adore it, I adore it, and man, you are so right - Duck is a tough guy to read and I love that Emily knows that.

Maybe, Emily thought glumly, rearranging the sugar packets, maybe when you were sixteen everything had to be awkward and embarrassing. Maybe it was a law. It would certainly explain a lot.

*love love LOVE*

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29/1/06 22:31 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
*twirls you* You make me happy, dude.

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29/1/06 17:31 (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] isiscolo.livejournal.com
Aw. Wilby stuck in your head is a good thing! I am a total sucker for stories from Emily's POV. This was very sweet.

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29/1/06 22:31 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
Thank you -- I'm glad this worked for you!

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29/1/06 22:36 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] mergatrude.livejournal.com
Lovely! So spot on I could see it happening before my eyes. Thank you.

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29/1/06 23:02 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
I'm so happy you liked it!

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29/1/06 23:33 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] scriggle.livejournal.com
So sweet. I love Emily. And Duck. And their interaction. Thank you.

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30/1/06 01:22 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!

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2/2/06 00:00 (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] oxoniensis.livejournal.com
Ah, this is just lovely: Emily's embarrassment, Sandra's amusement, Duck's inscrutability, and Dan's faint awkwardness. I just love all these characters so much, so having little snippets like this is a treat.

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2/2/06 17:31 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
Thank you so much -- I'm so glad you enjoyed it. (I love them all, man.)

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