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Hmmm. Snippet for [livejournal.com profile] aerye! This is still early enough in the timeline where it is F/K and F/V but not K/V yet -- the Mountie and his Boyfriends have not yet made their way to OT3 4-evah.

*****

The first time Ray sees Fraser kissing Vecchio, it feels like someone's ripping his heart out of his chest. Which doesn't make any sense, it doesn't, because he's okay with this, he really is. He thinks he is. They talked it over like adults, they have rules, everybody's happy.

It's not like he didn't know Fraser and Vecchio were fucking. And it's not even-- it's not, like, a sexy kiss or anything.

What happens is this: it's Saturday afternoon, they're all in the apartment, him and Vecchio are on the couch watching TV while Fraser is wandering around doing weird Fraser stuff. And then Fraser decides that, hey, it's a beautiful day, he and Dief are gonna take advantage of it, so he gets changed and the two of them are getting ready to go out and he promises to bring home some dinner with him, and that's all fine. And then he comes over to the couch and says "I'll be back soon" and leans over the back to kiss Ray good-bye, just like he's done a hundred million times before.

And then he does the same thing to Vecchio.

And Fraser's gone, and it's just Ray and Vecchio sitting on the couch alone, and Ray thinks maybe he's gonna throw up.

For a couple of minutes, Ray doesn't look over at Vecchio at all, just straight at the TV, straight ahead, no sideways at all.

And then when he does look over, he's surprised, because Vecchio is looking at him -- and for once, Vecchio doesn't have his tough guy face on. Vecchio looks maybe even a little sympathetic.

"YOu want me to go? I can go."

"What?" Ray says, playing it cool. "No, whatever. You can stay, I don't care."

Vecchio smiles a little bit, turns back to the TV, and Ray can't help staring at him a little longer than he should, going over it all again, the angles of his face, the thinning hair, the length of his fancy clothes. Fraser has sex with Vecchio, Ray thinks, and it doesn't do anything to his stomach at all. Fraser loves Vecchio, Ray thinks, and his hand clenches tight on the cushion.

For a second Ray wonders what it'd be like, kissing Vecchio, being in bed with him like he is with Fraser. He can't imagine it -- and then he can, and that's weird, really weird. And it almost makes him laugh, because he can just see it: the two of them in bed, and Fraser-- Fraser sitting in the corner watching. Because he would, Fraser would get off on that like nothing else; hell, he's probably been planning it already.

And then Ray must chuckle out loud, because Vecchio looks over at him, curious, and says, "What're you laughing about?"

"Nothing," Ray says. And after a minute, "Our boyfriend's a pervert."

And Vecchio is still looking at him when he breaks into a smile and shakes his head slowly, like he can't even argue, and then Ray laughs for real.

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23/4/06 00:49 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] justbreathe80.livejournal.com
Yay! The movement is alive and well and intellectual, I think. I really liked this. I subscribe to the idea that there are multiple ways they could have gotten into this situation, and this absolutely works for a Fraser-centric viewpoint.

My god, this movement is fun. Oh, and voyeuristic!Fraser? I totally see that too. He would so want to watch.

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23/4/06 21:14 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
Man, for Fraser, seeing two people he loves together? Like CANDY.

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23/4/06 21:28 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] justbreathe80.livejournal.com
Absolutely *g*

Psst, Pearl! There's comment porn (http://china-shop.livejournal.com/132327.html#cutid1) happening over on [livejournal.com profile] china_shop's journal, and some snippets over on mine (http://justbreathe80.livejournal.com/14186.html). Enjoy!

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23/4/06 21:32 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] justbreathe80.livejournal.com
That was supposed to say [livejournal.com profile] china_shop's journal. That will teach me not to preview before I post!

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23/4/06 01:10 (UTC)
loz: (Loz Purple)
Posted by [personal profile] loz
I liked that. A lot. The visual imagery.

This movement is probably the best movement of any fandom I've ever been in.

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23/4/06 21:14 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!

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23/4/06 01:37 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] c-regalis.livejournal.com
Oh yes. Yesss. I can see them. Al three of them. Neat..

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23/4/06 21:14 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
*beams* Yay.

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23/4/06 01:54 (UTC)
ext_12460: acquired from fanpop.com (watch by Kikala)
Posted by [identity profile] akite.livejournal.com
My icon says it all. *g*

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23/4/06 21:14 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
InDEED.

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23/4/06 02:06 (UTC)
sage: Still of Natasha Romanova from Iron Man 2 (ot3)
Posted by [personal profile] sage
"Our boyfriend's a pervert."

And Vecchio is still looking at him when he breaks into a smile and shakes his head slowly, like he can't even argue, and then Ray laughs for real.


YES!!!

*adores*

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23/4/06 21:15 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
Huzzah!

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23/4/06 02:34 (UTC)
ext_1611: Isis statue (f/k/v ot3)
Posted by [identity profile] isiscolo.livejournal.com
And it almost makes him laugh, because he can just see it: the two of them in bed, and Fraser-- Fraser sitting in the corner watching. Because he would, Fraser would get off on that like nothing else; hell, he's probably been planning it already.

And as a matter of fact, this is the one I'm writing.

Yay for lovely movement snippet! I love the slow steps toward understanding that Ray/Ray always requires.

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23/4/06 21:15 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
AWESOME. I cannot wait to read that!

I love every atom in your body.

23/4/06 03:50 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kormantic.livejournal.com
Woo! Boy kissing and jealousy and sweet, sweet love!
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
You are too kind, my dear!

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23/4/06 04:49 (UTC)
china_shop: Close-up of Zhao Yunlan grinning (Default)
Posted by [personal profile] china_shop
OMG, pearl! You wrote Ray/Ray pre-slash! ♥ This is utterly gorgeous -- I love RayK's gut reaction, and then the rethink, and then

For a second Ray wonders what it'd be like, kissing Vecchio, being in bed with him like he is with Fraser. He can't imagine it -- and then he can, and that's weird, really weird.

SO MUCH LOVE!!!

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23/4/06 21:15 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
*twirls you* YAY FOR BOYS.

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23/4/06 07:11 (UTC)
ext_842: (dS- shake)
Posted by [identity profile] etben.livejournal.com
oh god. I love you more than I love breathing, right now, and this? this is perfect. were you the poor unfortunate I commentspammed with maunderings about ray, who was trying to figure out the whole v/k thing, and v in general? was that you?

because dude. DUDE. you hit that like nobody's busy-ness. rock on.

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23/4/06 21:16 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
I don't even remember! It could have been! Because, yes, so much interesting stuff to explore in this situation. Mmmmm.

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23/4/06 07:13 (UTC)
lorem_ipsum: Chiana in profile, head back, eyes closed (nice crevasse by gilkurtis)
Posted by [personal profile] lorem_ipsum
Fraser has sex with Vecchio, Ray thinks, and it doesn't do anything to his stomach at all. Fraser loves Vecchio, Ray thinks, and his hand clenches tight on the cushion.

Yep. And that's exactly why it's the nonsexy kiss that bothers Ray.

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23/4/06 21:16 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
*nods* TOTALLY.

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23/4/06 15:50 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] brooklinegirl.livejournal.com
WOOBIES OMG

poor RAY. SO hard for him, and it makes my heart ache.

"YOu want me to go? I can go."

"What?" Ray says, playing it cool. "No, whatever. You can stay, I don't care."


*pets anxiously*

go fuck, boys! things will be better after that!

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23/4/06 21:16 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com
*giggles* Dude, you are much too stressed over this! It is a HAPPY situation! It'll be okay! Seriously!

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30/4/06 08:24 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] the-cop.livejournal.com
Man, I want MORE. Also, is there a community for the movement? Because I am trying to keep up, but I know I'm missing some because I don't have everyone friended, etc. If there isn't, there needs to be!

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30/4/06 08:26 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] karabou.livejournal.com
adkljff wrong journal... *facepalm*

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