today is a day for self-centered memes

[schmerica]

Stealing this from liviapenn:

Quote a bit of my writing at me? Find that one story of mine that you really like, and find a sentence or a paragraph that presses your prose-buttons in the right way, and comment here with it? Don't care how long or short.

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[magdalyna.livejournal.com]

Joe followed, just like before. Just like always. Pete kissed him, and kissed him, and kissed him some more, and it was a good thing going here. Pete sort of wrapped one leg around Joe's hip and arched up, grinding against him, and it was really good, and Pete was still kissing him when Joe came, sort of moaning into his mouth.

[octette]

i love all of "your hands, clasped" -- never got over it. i can't even.

[zulu]

At first it was just her; Gerard said she had to learn what she likes, what gets her off, that it's important for girls to know that, because you shouldn't have to rely on anyone else. He wanted her to, like, experiment and it was weird and kind of amazing, how different it was from her own two fingers. And even if Gerard wouldn't fuck her, fuck her for real, he was willing to do this, his fingers and his mouth and the warm silicone between her legs.

I think you've written some girl!Mikey not!mpreg Waycest? But I couldn't find it. This is great, though.

[thesamefire.livejournal.com]

It doesn't hurt, of course, that it's one of the hottest fucking things she's ever seen. Mikey's eyes are closed in concentration, and she can't help reaching out to stroke his bulging cheek, feeling the pressure of Pete's cock on the other side.

GOD DAMN.

[drunktuesdays.livejournal.com]

Pete actually writes about the kid a lot, although mostly not straight-on. He has a lot of vague journal entries about growing up and love and finding meaning. After the kid is born he goes into hyperbolic rapture, like the way he does about Patrick sometimes, but times a thousand. When Fall Out Boy's new album comes out in 2007, there are at least two songs on it that are commonly agreed to be about the kid, and another two that people are pretty sure are about Mikey. [People, in this case, are wrong; one of those two songs is about Patrick.]

[omphale]

Hmm. Maybe this:

It's going to be another four months before Ray kisses Fraser for the first time, and another two months after that before he realizes that that's it, that's love, but once he figures it out he's gonna know this is where it started, right here, like this, this moment, counting forward.

or possibly this:

Ray gave him an odd look, and said, "Why would I be a different person just because we're fucking?"

This thought struck Fraser as deeply profound.

or maybe any given sentence of "you hands, clasped." It's a little difficult to choose. *g*

[cass404.livejournal.com]

Probably introducing yourself to somebody and following up with "So I think I'm in love with you, and also I like your glasses. Want to make out?" was a bad idea. Pete could see that. He decided to go with the music gambit instead.

This is what Pete learned about the guy in the first half hour: his name was Mikey. He was indeed Gerard Way's baby brother. He was sixteen, starting his junior year of high school next week. (Pete managed to stop himself from responding to this statement with, "That's hot.") He was very knowledgable about bands, with good taste. He didn't talk a lot, but he was funny, in a really dry, sarcastic way. He didn't smile a lot, either, but when did, Pete thought his heart was going to stop from the way it changed his entire face.

This is what Pete learned about Mikey Way in the second half hour: Mikey was actually really very susceptible to the "Wanna make out?" gambit.