Scenes from a Beta
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schmericaThis is all, of course, completely paraphrased, but I think it gives you the spirit of the thing.
me: Here is my tiny Midsummer story! Make it not suck! *runs away*
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brooklinegirl: Here are some places where you made weird typoes, and here are a couple of lines that don't make any sense. Mostly it's good. Yays!
me: YAYS. *rereads* Wait, are you sure it doesn't suck? Look again.
brooklinegirl: Huh. Now that you mention it, I guess you could, you know, work on giving the characters any sort of emotion or evidence of human feelings. It's worth a shot.
me: ...I guess. *rewrites*
brooklinegirl: That's totally much less sucky! You rock!
me: YAYS FOR REAL THIS TIME.
The End (For Now)
me: Here is my tiny Midsummer story! Make it not suck! *runs away*
brooklinegirl: Here are some places where you made weird typoes, and here are a couple of lines that don't make any sense. Mostly it's good. Yays!me: YAYS. *rereads* Wait, are you sure it doesn't suck? Look again.
brooklinegirl: Huh. Now that you mention it, I guess you could, you know, work on giving the characters any sort of emotion or evidence of human feelings. It's worth a shot.me: ...I guess. *rewrites*
brooklinegirl: That's totally much less sucky! You rock!me: YAYS FOR REAL THIS TIME.
The End (For Now)
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